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Quick summary

Nice work staying active and converting long, messy positions into wins — your recent long win shows good endgame grit and promotion technique. That said, several losses share the same root causes (early king-safety problems and tactical oversights). Below are concrete, practical fixes you can apply right away.

What you're doing well

• You convert passed pawns and material advantages reliably — in your long win you pushed pawns to promotion and used the new queen(s) to force mate (ajieekk).
• You keep fighting in chaotic positions instead of resigning early — that resilience produces the practical chances you need in rapid games.
• Your repertoire includes sharp, decisive systems (Alekhine, Elephant Gambit) — those give you winning chances and suit your aggressive style.

Recurring weaknesses (concrete examples)

Several recent losses ended with the opponent delivering a fast queen/knight or queen mate on f2/f1/d2. That pattern points to two repeatable mistakes:

• King safety: moving the wrong knight early (Na3 / Nb5) or failing to castle leaves f2/f7 weak and open to queen checks. Example: the game that ended with queen takes f2 mate — you left f2 vulnerable and the opponent exploited it. See the key sequence below for study:

• Tactical awareness under checks: after a forcing check (knight checks, queen checks) you sometimes miss follow-up threats like a queen infiltrating the back rank or hitting f2/f1.
• Moving the same piece repeatedly early instead of finishing development: this hands tempo to the opponent and creates holes near your king.

What to work on next (practical drill plan)

• Tactics: 15–20 minutes daily of mating-pattern puzzles. Filter puzzles for "queen + knight forks", "f2/f7 attacks" and Back rank mates. Focus on recognition, not speed, for a week.
• Mini-games for king safety: play 5 rapid games (10|0 or 5|0) where you force yourself to castle by move 7. Observe how that changes the game's tactical balance.
• Opening trap practice: for the opponent moves you see often (early Qf6, Bc5 lines), drill the typical responses: avoid Na3/Nb5 when f2 is soft — prefer Nc3 or castle. Keep a short one‑page note for each opening with the 3 common traps to watch for.
• Endgame: 10 minutes twice a week on king+pawn vs king and queen vs rook endings — your conversion is already a strength; make it faster and less error-prone under the clock.

Quick fixes you can apply in your next session

• Before you move, quickly scan "is f2/f7 attacked or leaving a check?" — if yes, re-check all captures and checks that follow.
• If the opponent brings the queen out early (Qf6/Qe6), slow down and finish development instead of grabbing space with eccentric knight moves.
• When ahead in material, trade into a simpler endgame quickly and shepherd passed pawns — you already do this well, do it earlier to avoid countertricks.
• Make a short opening card: for each opening line you play, put the 2 moves that would lose quickly and the safe alternative to avoid them.

Study priorities (1–4 week plan)

• Week 1: Daily tactics (mating patterns) 15–20 minutes + 5 training games forcing early castling.
• Week 2: Review the Alekhine and Elephant Gambit traps and 5 most common responses from opponents. Make a 1‑page cheat sheet.
• Week 3: Endgame drill — queen and pawn promotion technique, basic rook endings.
• Week 4: Play longer rapid (10|5) and review 1 lost game per session — write 3 lessons from each loss (what I missed, why, how to avoid next time).

Small habits that give big returns

• After every opponent check, pause and count attackers and defenders of the checking line — many of your mates come from missing the follow-up.
• When you see the opponent's queen heading toward your king side, prioritize moves that shore up f2/f1 (pawn moves, bishop to e2, or castling) over flashy knight hops.
• Keep a post‑game note: write one sentence about the biggest tactical miss in the game. After 10 games you’ll see patterns very clearly.

Want a deeper review?

Send one full game you want me to annotate move-by-move (pick a loss and a win). I can:

• Mark 3 critical moments and give exact candidate moves to consider.
• Provide a short training sequence (puzzles + opening tweaks) tailored to that game.

Also, if you want, I can link the recent opponents so you can review their games: aspilado • ajieekk.